Revision progress Pages complete: 43% Word count reduction: 11.4% Man, revisions on Dwarves of Katie Elder feels like it’s going so slowly. I started on May 21, and two months later, I’m only 43% done. I don’t know what it is, I don’t think I did anything different. I feel like I’m going to the thesaurus every second sentence. Maybe it’s got something to do with my first draft. I tried more of a “word vomit, just get the first draft done” kind of style where I didn’t fret about word choice. I figured anything that needed fixing could be fixed in post (as we say in the movie business).…